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Post by Kanchana on Apr 27, 2010 15:57:15 GMT 8
Ok, well...I wrote this poem....no idea where it came from....its just did....comments welcome. (any ideas for a name?) He's crushing my dreams Under his fingertips And I know as the sound of frogs Wakes me from my slumber I will never again sleep I will never again sleep
For this is the dream in which I could be dead One thousand years And never get it right
This is the dream That always fades But forever exists Still frame somewhere In the depths of my soul
I will go out to my canoe in the morning Leaving this place behind He can crush this dream all he wants It will still be in my mind
The coyotes howl for their dinner And I cry for home Wishing he was by my side But we have gone separate And here I am watching And there he is alone
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Post by erosaf on Apr 27, 2010 19:29:28 GMT 8
Very nice, Kanchana. You are SO much better than I am at poems. I really suck
As for the name how about: Dream Crusher?
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Post by Kanchana on Apr 27, 2010 19:31:10 GMT 8
Grrr don't say that again! *pokes*
Hmm...btw love the name Dream Crusher...any more ideas? For names that is...
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Post by erosaf on Apr 27, 2010 19:37:07 GMT 8
Don't we have this arguement enough on MSN?
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Post by Kanchana on Apr 28, 2010 5:32:33 GMT 8
Hmmm true enough ^^ though....it is bad and u are a good writer!
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Post by Hans1 on Apr 28, 2010 5:35:24 GMT 8
How about Bad Dreams or Dreams just a suggestion
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Post by Kanchana on Apr 28, 2010 14:55:52 GMT 8
^^ very nice Hans, I like dreams....but it needs something else.
What do you guys think of this?
Blinding Nightmares or even The Dreams that never started?
Hmm....*shrug* i suck at names...
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Post by Hans1 on Apr 29, 2010 4:56:12 GMT 8
Blinding Nightmares and dreams or Blinding Nightmares or the dreams that never started OOC Blinding Nightmares and dreams is my idea and Blinding Nightmares is yours and so is dreams that never started
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