Post by Rosey-Lew ^.^ on Sept 2, 2010 23:54:12 GMT 8
I'm needing somone to tell me how to RP better...
Example;
All that could be heard was the soft, incandescant sound of the crickets, and thier breathing. They stood apart, the large stallion on the northenmost side, the mare on the south. They simply stared, fire and ice. This statment was one of fact, for the large brute that was the male shimmered with fire, it smouldered beneath his skin, blazed among the threads of his mane. The fae, however, a tiny nymph of an equine, stood among fluid, her appendages hung like waterfalls from her roots, her mere being was smooth and graceful, sinuous, like water over rocks. At first, the equine's intentions were unclear, thier expressions somwhat unreadable. Neither seemed frightened, nor joyed at the one they had met, until, the-one-who-was-fluid spoke.
"Well, well, well Ares, it's been some time." At the fairie's words, the behemoth broke into a smile, his red luminaries softening.
"That it has, Aphrodite, far too long." She too smiled, her kissers twiching upward. They both turned, alothough far apart in the open space, to peer through the trees into the camp of the humans. Ares growled, his dark form quivering. The mare's gaze settled lightly on him, and her voice whipped past him, quivering like a butterflies wings. "They grow stronger by the hour, brother, they will not be stopped." She turned her gaze from her sibling's quivering form to the bipeds. "The two-legs are taking our lands, stealing our children, we must do what we can to stop them." The mare, peace loving as she was, relished the idea of a world without humans, where creatures could live without fear. She turned to her brother, flickering her auds. "Make it quick." She said shrotly, before stealing out of the clearing through the trees, toward the demons. They all paused and stared at the beautiful elemental that had appeared, and then they were scrambling, grabbing ropes and hopping atop their mounts. They forced the equines forth, thrusting their spurred heels into the sides of the quadrapeds. However, the stallions and mares would not attack the lovley fae, for she was one of them, they had heard stories, but never thought the twins would come to them and rescue them, as they had done throughout the lands. As they stalled, turning on their haunches to avoid approaching the fae, there was light. The houses and stocks of the humans set alight, as Ares stood watching from the corner. There was yells as they dismounted, struggling to subdue the blaze. Though, as they were occupied, a river wound around them, between them and their steeds. Trapped as they were by the elemental twin's powers, the humans would surley perish. Some attempted to swim, but, it was with a heavy smile, that Aphrodite dragged them beneath the surface. The enslaved ran, knowing that they were free once again.
Ares and Aphrodite watched, with polite smiles, as the humans burned.
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Example;
All that could be heard was the soft, incandescant sound of the crickets, and thier breathing. They stood apart, the large stallion on the northenmost side, the mare on the south. They simply stared, fire and ice. This statment was one of fact, for the large brute that was the male shimmered with fire, it smouldered beneath his skin, blazed among the threads of his mane. The fae, however, a tiny nymph of an equine, stood among fluid, her appendages hung like waterfalls from her roots, her mere being was smooth and graceful, sinuous, like water over rocks. At first, the equine's intentions were unclear, thier expressions somwhat unreadable. Neither seemed frightened, nor joyed at the one they had met, until, the-one-who-was-fluid spoke.
"Well, well, well Ares, it's been some time." At the fairie's words, the behemoth broke into a smile, his red luminaries softening.
"That it has, Aphrodite, far too long." She too smiled, her kissers twiching upward. They both turned, alothough far apart in the open space, to peer through the trees into the camp of the humans. Ares growled, his dark form quivering. The mare's gaze settled lightly on him, and her voice whipped past him, quivering like a butterflies wings. "They grow stronger by the hour, brother, they will not be stopped." She turned her gaze from her sibling's quivering form to the bipeds. "The two-legs are taking our lands, stealing our children, we must do what we can to stop them." The mare, peace loving as she was, relished the idea of a world without humans, where creatures could live without fear. She turned to her brother, flickering her auds. "Make it quick." She said shrotly, before stealing out of the clearing through the trees, toward the demons. They all paused and stared at the beautiful elemental that had appeared, and then they were scrambling, grabbing ropes and hopping atop their mounts. They forced the equines forth, thrusting their spurred heels into the sides of the quadrapeds. However, the stallions and mares would not attack the lovley fae, for she was one of them, they had heard stories, but never thought the twins would come to them and rescue them, as they had done throughout the lands. As they stalled, turning on their haunches to avoid approaching the fae, there was light. The houses and stocks of the humans set alight, as Ares stood watching from the corner. There was yells as they dismounted, struggling to subdue the blaze. Though, as they were occupied, a river wound around them, between them and their steeds. Trapped as they were by the elemental twin's powers, the humans would surley perish. Some attempted to swim, but, it was with a heavy smile, that Aphrodite dragged them beneath the surface. The enslaved ran, knowing that they were free once again.
Ares and Aphrodite watched, with polite smiles, as the humans burned.
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