Post by Corrupted Soul on Oct 27, 2009 13:24:18 GMT 8
Chapter 1
The town was encased in darknesss. It was around midnight. The stars and moon had appeared, unhidden by clouds, and smoke rising from the homes of those still awake. The only source of light were the outdoor lamps in the old haunted park, and homes of which people stayed up.
A playground was settled in the middle of the park, surrounded by grass and trees. Most would be wise to stay away from the park, as it had many terrible rumors around it, but some, stupid enough ventured, and never returned, one of them, was a girl called Rachel Swediski....
Rachel was a girl who lived in a normal town, called Juari. The town was plotted in the middle of nowhere, and had some 'scary' rumors about it, they were true of course. She got everything she wanted, except to move to another location.
Her parents worked all night, and all day, she never got to see them, or even wanted to. Her hair was black, tied back in a ponytail, and she always wore her dark blue three-legged jeans, white sneakers, and hot pink top, that said "Too Cool For You"; in black bold writing.
She was 12 years old, and was friends with Belle Dervain, and Kayla Wright. They were the 'terrible threesome girls' of the town, and always caused trouble. Their hideout was the haunted park, just to be feared as well.
Belle Dervain, was the daredevil of the group, who always bugged everyone into doing things, she wanted. She had light brown hair, that fell down to her shoulders. She always wore a black sweatshirt, and blue track pants, with black slip-ons.
Kayla Wright, was the nervous one, who always wanted to stay at home. She hated to do scary stuff, and always wears heaps of make up, for no apparent reason. Other than black miskara, black eye liner, and ruby red lipgloss, she had blonde hair, cut in a bob cut. She always wore green shorts, a white t-shirt, with a sky blue sweatshirt, and yellow sandals.
Rachel, Belle and Kayla laughed together, as they walked arm-in-arm to the park, they thought it was just like every other midnight, that they traveled, there, as it was their time to talk about what they wished.
Their parents never knew they were there, at midnight, as they would surely be banned from the place, but what their parents didn't know, wouldn't hurt, right?
Rachel stopped for a moment, at the edge of the park.
"What are you waiting for, Rachel? Come on.." Kayla moaned, she looked around, it was cold, and she wanted to get the talk over, so she could go back home, and sleep in her comfy warm bed.
"Maybe she's scared!" Belle taunted, laughing at her. She didn't care, if she was being mean, it was her normal personality.
"N-nothing.." Rachel replied, but there was a nagging sensation that everything was not alright..
Something was definitely wrong. She stepped forwards, out of the tree, she thought she saw a figure watching them.. A man in a cloak. "M-maybe we should go back.." She stuttered quietly. She looked at Kayla and Belle, and looked back to where the man had been, he was gone.
Belle and Kayla didn't hear her, they were already walking forwards ahead. Kayla stopped, looking back at her. "You sure, Rachel?" She asked her quietly. Rachel looked down at her feet.
"Well.. I have a feeling that something is going to go wrong.. I just know it." Kayla walked towards Rachel and smiled. "Theres nothing to worry about, its just like every normal day, Rachel."
There was a scream. Rachel looked up, Kayla looked around.
Belle was screaming, somewhere, but they couldn't see her.
"SOMEONE! HELP ME!" Rachel then saw the man carrying Belle away. "Over there! Come on Kayla!" Rachel cried, and tore after the man and Belle, Kayla running after her.
Chapter 2
Rachel fell to her knee, screaming for help, crying.
Kayla puffed behind her, trying to catch up to Rachel, scared.
"Rachel, come on, lets go home.. Maybe the police can help find them.." Tears streamed down her face, but her voice didn't quiver in sadness.
Rachel looked up, seeing Kayla's tears, she pulled her into a hug.
She didn't know what to do. They had to do something..Right? Or should they just sit around, wondering what was happening to her, Belle, their best friend?
Kayla turned her head, as there was a rustle in the bushes.
"Let's go, Rachel, hurry!" She cried, and turned back the way they could. Rachel hesitated for a second, and began to jog back. She heard a voice. "You will all be punished in the end..."
Rachel felt a shiver up her spine, and began to sprint, taking Kayla's hand, they raced down the streets, towards the police station.
Buildings and houses seemed to fly by them, as they ran.
Kayla almost tripped as they jumped over a trashcan, tipped on its side. They passed their houses, and then stopped a few minutes later at the Police Station.
They ran up the stairs, and pushed on the doors, they didn't open, the doors was locked, and there was no one to be found. All the lights suddenly went out, except a head light above them, it blinked every few minutes.
"You will be punished, my dears.. Everyone will be.."
It was the same voice as before.. The ghastly one, that sent shivers to Rachel's spine. "Who's there?!" Kayla cried out, scared, she grabbed onto Rachel's arm.
A figure appeared. "You will be punished." It was the man, in the cloak, the one that had abducted Belle, he was here.. To take them now. Kayla let out a scream, and the light switched off.
Chapter 3
The town was encased in darknesss. It was around midnight. The stars and moon had appeared, unhidden by clouds, and smoke rising from the homes of those still awake. The only source of light were the outdoor lamps in the old haunted park, and homes of which people stayed up.
A playground was settled in the middle of the park, surrounded by grass and trees. Most would be wise to stay away from the park, as it had many terrible rumors around it, but some, stupid enough ventured, and never returned, one of them, was a girl called Rachel Swediski....
Rachel was a girl who lived in a normal town, called Juari. The town was plotted in the middle of nowhere, and had some 'scary' rumors about it, they were true of course. She got everything she wanted, except to move to another location.
Her parents worked all night, and all day, she never got to see them, or even wanted to. Her hair was black, tied back in a ponytail, and she always wore her dark blue three-legged jeans, white sneakers, and hot pink top, that said "Too Cool For You"; in black bold writing.
She was 12 years old, and was friends with Belle Dervain, and Kayla Wright. They were the 'terrible threesome girls' of the town, and always caused trouble. Their hideout was the haunted park, just to be feared as well.
Belle Dervain, was the daredevil of the group, who always bugged everyone into doing things, she wanted. She had light brown hair, that fell down to her shoulders. She always wore a black sweatshirt, and blue track pants, with black slip-ons.
Kayla Wright, was the nervous one, who always wanted to stay at home. She hated to do scary stuff, and always wears heaps of make up, for no apparent reason. Other than black miskara, black eye liner, and ruby red lipgloss, she had blonde hair, cut in a bob cut. She always wore green shorts, a white t-shirt, with a sky blue sweatshirt, and yellow sandals.
Rachel, Belle and Kayla laughed together, as they walked arm-in-arm to the park, they thought it was just like every other midnight, that they traveled, there, as it was their time to talk about what they wished.
Their parents never knew they were there, at midnight, as they would surely be banned from the place, but what their parents didn't know, wouldn't hurt, right?
Rachel stopped for a moment, at the edge of the park.
"What are you waiting for, Rachel? Come on.." Kayla moaned, she looked around, it was cold, and she wanted to get the talk over, so she could go back home, and sleep in her comfy warm bed.
"Maybe she's scared!" Belle taunted, laughing at her. She didn't care, if she was being mean, it was her normal personality.
"N-nothing.." Rachel replied, but there was a nagging sensation that everything was not alright..
Something was definitely wrong. She stepped forwards, out of the tree, she thought she saw a figure watching them.. A man in a cloak. "M-maybe we should go back.." She stuttered quietly. She looked at Kayla and Belle, and looked back to where the man had been, he was gone.
Belle and Kayla didn't hear her, they were already walking forwards ahead. Kayla stopped, looking back at her. "You sure, Rachel?" She asked her quietly. Rachel looked down at her feet.
"Well.. I have a feeling that something is going to go wrong.. I just know it." Kayla walked towards Rachel and smiled. "Theres nothing to worry about, its just like every normal day, Rachel."
There was a scream. Rachel looked up, Kayla looked around.
Belle was screaming, somewhere, but they couldn't see her.
"SOMEONE! HELP ME!" Rachel then saw the man carrying Belle away. "Over there! Come on Kayla!" Rachel cried, and tore after the man and Belle, Kayla running after her.
Chapter 2
Rachel fell to her knee, screaming for help, crying.
Kayla puffed behind her, trying to catch up to Rachel, scared.
"Rachel, come on, lets go home.. Maybe the police can help find them.." Tears streamed down her face, but her voice didn't quiver in sadness.
Rachel looked up, seeing Kayla's tears, she pulled her into a hug.
She didn't know what to do. They had to do something..Right? Or should they just sit around, wondering what was happening to her, Belle, their best friend?
Kayla turned her head, as there was a rustle in the bushes.
"Let's go, Rachel, hurry!" She cried, and turned back the way they could. Rachel hesitated for a second, and began to jog back. She heard a voice. "You will all be punished in the end..."
Rachel felt a shiver up her spine, and began to sprint, taking Kayla's hand, they raced down the streets, towards the police station.
Buildings and houses seemed to fly by them, as they ran.
Kayla almost tripped as they jumped over a trashcan, tipped on its side. They passed their houses, and then stopped a few minutes later at the Police Station.
They ran up the stairs, and pushed on the doors, they didn't open, the doors was locked, and there was no one to be found. All the lights suddenly went out, except a head light above them, it blinked every few minutes.
"You will be punished, my dears.. Everyone will be.."
It was the same voice as before.. The ghastly one, that sent shivers to Rachel's spine. "Who's there?!" Kayla cried out, scared, she grabbed onto Rachel's arm.
A figure appeared. "You will be punished." It was the man, in the cloak, the one that had abducted Belle, he was here.. To take them now. Kayla let out a scream, and the light switched off.
Chapter 3